So I started drawing the actual comic yesterday, and today I have completed the first page. It's proving to be a bit of a long process, but I'll get there. There's some stupid URL thing stopping me from posting the image with this, and I don't want to work out how to do it now. So I'm setting up a topic in the art forum of NewGrounds called "feedback on first page of comic", so go check it out there and give me some feedback, it would be appreciated.